flow-mike
punches-mike
personals-none
structure-mike
creativity-tie
enjoyment-mike

vote/mike

you had a better overall verse.....your flow was going good and your structure was bettr then his......work on your punches and deffinly put personals in your verse even if they are weak it is better then nun

g-you need to elevate......i would expect sumwun with your status to come alot harder and better.......but i guess that i over estamated you....

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