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Old 05-16-04, 06:20 PM   #11
Rising Sun
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k fine mind has good vocab, but does not make much sense. when he attempts to drop punches, they are often played out. you are promising emcee, but you need to rhyme and flow more. learn when to use the elevated vocabulary....no offense...but weak verse....

Been here since the beggining, and no one thinks i'm special
I murk from the sinning - and clot up mind's 'Blood-Vessels'. ok......
Fuck your beliefs, i'll demolish your whole crew
Like schools without the D.A.R.E program - We're all using you. don“t make much sense to me....it might be my noobness
Today at 10:42 you got your ass raped by a pair of "shifty Fingers"
so im sitting here wondering why your ass stecnch still lingers meh....
this cats wack.....you can measure his wackness on a scall from 1-10
On may fourth 2004.....you got sonned by a wack cat named Hexen meh...........

no offense...sort of a wack battle, but black takes this easily for harder punches....at least he had better ones than fine mind......and he knows when to use his vocab....therefore, I vote for black...
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