Thread: t-storm vs L.I.
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Old 05-16-04, 06:35 PM   #15
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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li
had s strong verse strong punches and good strcuture
example:Read your old verses, damn man, why’d you bother to come here…
With a wack rhyme scheme, no punches, ended your elevated career…
^^good^^^
nice flow
work oon your punches a lil more
----------------------------overall *8*-------------------------------------------------------------
t-storm
kinda wack, bad structure not good flow wasnt feelin your verse or punches
example:Read your old verses, damn man, why’d you bother to come here…
With a wack rhyme scheme, no punches, ended your elevated career…
u cant beat someone even close to good with that what were you thinking
verse *4*
my vote goes to LI
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