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Old 05-16-04, 06:46 PM   #8
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n sight - okay you started off good....first few bars were hot....than u fell off....u need to sustain the tempo....so werk on that....flow was straight...punches werelacked...only about 4 good ones....wordplay could use sum werk....u tried too hard for multis toward the end....u dont always need them.....no great personals....nolost4rhymes bar was decent....jus werk on wordplay and sustaining your tempo.....decent verse...
6.7/10

discharge - aight another decent spit...started off decent....kicked it up sum....fell off a lil....then kicked it up some toward the end.....u also tried to hard for multis....so werk on that....same level on wordplay.....elevate there.....u had more and better meta's....so thats a plus.....u had better punches....didnt have the better flow....no great personals either.....
7.4/10

Vote - discharge...because of the punches....
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