N sight-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and
metaphores......just work on a few things and ya will be there......

Discharge-Came kind of weak....Work on something structure was ok
but work on some thing.....balace was good but some was
weak and some was hard.....But keep elevatin and work on alot
of things
v/insight

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