This was a decent battle... I the only problem I had with either of your flows was the flow itself... sometimes the lines stretched for both of you so it made readin it a little choppy.... As far as verbal ability it was clear that Optimus had this battle won from his first bar onward... He just made it very easy to follow his thoughts and keep up with his punches.... I really liked a few of his verses too while Roc was hot about 50 percent of the time... Ima give Jae Roc a 6 outta 10 on this while ima give Optimus a 7.75 outta 10... Vote - Optimus...
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