I KNOW YOU AINT GOOD, plus you''l never wioll be able to get yours FLOWS UNDERSTOOD,
Cause Blacks the tpyes you ((SHOVE JACKETS DOWN YA THROAT)) makin your THROW UP YA HOOD)), nice
This BOYS WORTHLESS and you prevoius battle arent helpig you get sick like TOY NURSES,
And you couldnt be (( LYRICAL DESTRUCTION)) if you deSTROY VERSES, ok....
What I've WROTE IT HECKTIK, you'd denied my talent after I already have TOLD I"M VET BITCh, meh....
And the type to ((CONNECT YA FEET TO YA HEADS)) like YOGA STRETCHES, ok....
I've already had warned you that I'm oblious not the correct ONE TO TEST KID,
Cause like POWERFUL TOILETS, I'll easily CRUSH YOUR BEST SHIT, nice..........
I'll DISPOSE THIS VET, and pentrate knives iinto his spleen and INCLOSE HIS CHEST,
Cause I'm like (( GETTING FLAHSED BY REAPERS)) I'll leave him EXPOSED TO DEATH,
nice ending nice verse
some lines were a little questionable, but nice wordplay, you need more multies...and make sure your verse isnt played out.....its good punches...but you gotta make sure...

Black Magik Take Back Your Whack Newb Jacket You Cant Hack It...
That Verse Was Just Horible And Only Shitty Newbs Use Brackets...damn!!!!!!!!
Im Dropin My Shit On You Like You Was The Crapper That Can Seat To...
I Dont Even Need To Try Because Even My Rapper Can Beat You...hahahaha
Sayin Your The Greatest Wit Your Whack Flow Thats Unbelievable...
Beatin Me Aint As Easy And Wit Your Whack Flow It Aint Achievable...meh.......
Im Smokin A Guy From Youngs-Town He's Turnin My Lungs-Brown...
Got Brackets Around His Verse And Name Soundin Like A Clown...noooo
Goin To Drown You In The Ocean, GKillaz Dont Show Any Emotion...
Once My Crew See's How Badly I Merked You I Gun Get A Promotion...ok..............
gkillaz, your openers were hot as hell but then you fell off like a newb.....damn man...if u spit like that the whole time, you woulda won for sure.....but good battle, nice personals, sry man...
i give it to the other guy for consistency....peace...no hate

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