bakn work on ur structure ur lines r uneven and stretched work onm ur flow 2 usin the same word 2 make shit rhyme is just corney and ur vocab is far 2 basic work on that 2
and throw in some personals ill give u a 5/10


u had better vocab than him but could still use a lil work id like 2 c multis and personals worked on but besides those good verse i personally think u should b banned 4 ur racist closer

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