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interesting collabo
#1...the chorus was good...but you can't use words like BUBBLE GUM in rap...lol
dat sounds extremely gay
um...This was well written on both parts
Spul tried to use imagery, but fell short of painting vivid pictures like Triple N
Triples imagery was more poignant and effective
Both, however, were well done.
Spul...you had nice references..yours was more of an open mic structure than Triples, whose structure is obvisously biased toward audio
Rhyme wise..it's pretty nice
overall, this is a 7.5/10 drop
not great, but really good...
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