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Old 05-16-04, 10:17 PM   #2
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interesting collabo

#1...the chorus was good...but you can't use words like BUBBLE GUM in rap...lol

dat sounds extremely gay


um...This was well written on both parts

Spul tried to use imagery, but fell short of painting vivid pictures like Triple N

Triples imagery was more poignant and effective

Both, however, were well done.


Spul...you had nice references..yours was more of an open mic structure than Triples, whose structure is obvisously biased toward audio


Rhyme wise..it's pretty nice


overall, this is a 7.5/10 drop

not great, but really good...


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