bingo!
From: holdin down the three-one-three |
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IP:
ok
accomplishment
u under estimated this new kat
u had bad strcuture weak flow
fair punches
your best line:finished wit this shit, fuck it blak, take a while...
...cuz ten to one chances...
ur verse is gonna have quotes from 8 mile.../
look at that wack structure i was talkin bout^^^
overall*6* bias and alias dont really rhyme either
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black
good verse solid structure
not great punches but they did the job
^^work on your punches^^
best lines:Leave Kids ‘Folded-&-Finished’! .. Turn This Bitch Into A ‘Bold-Witness ..
Test Me? And Get Slugs To ‘Show up on our Porch’ like ‘Jehova-Witness ..
Only "Accomplishment" you gunna achive this battle is make it 12 for you loss..
have on your knees by the end beging please like Tony Danza on who the boss..
like i said^^ not great punch but nice verse better than his
alias and bias doesnt rhymes accomp
kno dat
my vote black
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