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Old 05-17-04, 01:16 AM   #21
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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ooh-wop ur gay fa real well n e wayz

Tay g *Sincity* ya structure fucked uo u need alot of work on that i didint feel ur flow that much but u did good

Killah bwoy u did good i say u probly took it ya flow wasint messed up ya structure was good u took this

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Tay g

Flow 8/10 its was good
rhymes 8/10 the same
Structure 1/10 its was messed up u need lessons on that
Punches 7/10
Over all

24/40

Killah Bwoy

FLow 8/10 nice nigga
Rhymes 9/10 u did madd good this 1
Structure 7/10 thats where u killed him
Punches 7/10
31/40
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