Hood you can''t be foreal man why you gotta pretend
You couldn't keystroke a WIN... if ya typed W-I-N
Hood talkin that trash but he know I know that he bluffin'
Check it..I'mma give him my gun turn around and watch him do nothin'
Hardcore battle bitch spittin versus that's stunnin'
Make you fold like Eddie George when Ray Lewis is commin'

This was Smokes hottest part of the verse and it came in the end- I didn't think he was gonna pull off the victory until I got half way through the verse when he started droppin some punches... His flow was excellent most of the verse and it had good struc.

like "Instant win Prizes" i jus can't loose//
"SmokeSkreen" u got ya name from a pokemon move//lol
calm down dude b4 ya ass catch a full clip//
word on da street "General" aint da one ta full wit//
i'll leave ya body full of bulletz da size of pool stickz//
i'm thug enuff ta leave u fuk'd up wit ya wig split//
This was General Hoods best part of the verse, and the olympic torches one later on was a punchline, but noone of em hit very hard, I think you just need more time and youll elevate.... Vote- $

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