yo im gonna sufficate you blaitlently, going to do it endlessly/
I'm gonna cremate you and use u as fishing bait for fish to eat ya/
Garbage
When i come aross I string you by the neck choking, and i start laughing/
can't wait for your cussing when you start dissing, cause i know i won't listen/
weak
you don't deserve to be a rapper, your more like a claimer 2 try n act famous/
I got you on my little string like a yoyo toss you up in der air and got lost/
wtf is this?
My lyrcis twist what you say it's almost like they got a mind of there own/
I stole your spot light do blame me fame isn't exacly your thing/
Do you ever rhyme?
You read kids books, look up kinder gardener scar books, n learn how 2 cook!/
When i come into contact, this a fact, you run away like a crab side ways/
whoa was that a punchline? holy sihshit- 1 point.
Fine Mind you wack..your like a horny guy tryin to look for a goat..
Your bitch ass rhymes is pressed more than my universal remote.....
Decent opener- flows, and a punchline.. 2 points
This nigga is wack..TO help ya,you might need to look at the avatars..
He so horny he beats his meat 20 times a day and then play with indee cars
Not feelin it
Im commin weak right now but I can come hard but im goin to be nice...
You fucked up now..For battling me you should take his advice
This nigga think he can do what ever he want...Wake up to reality.
Becuz you better pay attention b4 I (ripp) ya head off like a mortal Kombat Fitality
not amazing but a punchline none the less 1 point
You fucked up now for battlin me...you just committed a sin.....
If ya really want lose bring out the real 2pac...Ill beat him and bury back again..
weak closer
so its 3 points to 1 in favor of iLL....My vote goes to ill... I think fine mind needs to elevate his punches, rhymes, wordplay and iLL just needs to work on his punches and maybe some wordplay to get super nice.... Good luck in the future both of you
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124761 <~Topical battle