DON
Eric 89 dont u know it takes a man to battle...
i jus ride u like my bitch with a saddle...
^weak opener.....both filler lines no real punch
i dont wana hurt u cause a baby cant part wit its rattle...
do wat u skilled at,go on boy, run and skedaddle...
^^filler lines once again
for u this battelin stuff a little too rough...
im a DON and i dont play around much...
^^rough and much dont rhyme
a skilled italians is somethin a boy like u cant touch...
lets see if i step on him will we hear a crack...
^^lines dont blend and they FILLERS...also crack and touch dont rhyme
you a fake white craka wat u gona say next, gat?...
maybe u be urself weak and smart,and jus not write bak...
^^first line......WTF was u thinkin....second okay but really noobish
elevate man....all filler lines and 3 of you bars didnt even rhyme....lol
Eric
They call me eric89 cuz that’s the year I came in this world
A kid with down syndrome can spit better then u and hes mentally 5 years old
^^first line filler second weak punch but you tryed
The times iv KO’ed these veterans on here is countless
I murder emcees day in and day out on a regual basis
^^....first line i know isnt true cause umm you aint half as good as me or ne other vets.....second was okay but still a FILLER
Yo battling me is like playin uker but I have all the power
Its not possible for u to win cuz I have the right and left bower
^^ummm not sure bout this line.....FILLER
They call me emcee freshness cuz I have the freshest spits
They call me lay-u-out cuz thas what ima do when I bring my strongest hits
^^dont ever use shit like that again!!!! thats a big NO NO
I spit so fast by the time ur done spittin I’ll be gone for miles
Why don’t u just switch to country music cuz that is ur style
^^haha not a bad closer you learning
both you really need to elevate and throw some real punches and ad some personals........without those you aint gunna win against somebody that has even one punch....eric if this kat came with a punch you woulda been kod....but you probably will cause all these wack peeps is voting and dont know how the fuck to....take it from an Old RB vet....eric one this battle
v/eric
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