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Old 05-17-04, 07:33 AM   #20
$MOKESKREEN
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Iceberg your word play was nice you punches were better sometimes than others. the line "I'll scissor this bitch into a chop shop remove hands n seconds as if I took apart clocks" was a bit too long.

Seven - Good shit man. you did a nice <A TITLE="Click for more information about job" STYLE="text-decoration: none; border-bottom: medium solid green;" HREF="http://search.targetwords.com/u.search?x=5977|1||||job|AA1VDw">job</A> on your punches your opener and closer was a little better than Ice's. Good use of word play

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