Aight let me break this down from my point of view
Plus two:
Your verse was aight though it lacked punches. Actually at second glance your verse was pretty basic if nothing else.
Hottest line:
In my eyes you didn't have one.
Worst line:
Tough decision.
No disrespect homie I just wasn't feelin it.
Blacksmith:
Your verse was good your opponent made your verse look great though. Tha wordplay was nice and your punches were way harder and hotter.
Hottest line:
"Blacks cipher settle shit in fates...cuz if it's beef then plus twos a thin steak"
Worst line:
"Your verse looks played like you ran around tha block too many times gee"
All in all tho homie your verse was way better you got this wit ease pimpery.
vote=blacksmith
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