i was really liking this. its a very good topic to. i never seen anybody poet about rain and their life and make it into one. really liking this,

Raindrops....soft as cotton, falling by the millions
Every individual drop represents my feelings

I thought that was a real good way to start it off.

But for all the times of rain....there are times when the sun spreads its rays
But God knows I love those rainy days

thats real nice, i only like this because you made it sound so clear, n i was really into this poem.

one thing tho, instead of putting it all like how you did, lets say the structure, try breaking it down into seperate stanzas', like your first 6 lines will be ur first stanza so on and so on,, pce