this was real good, i think i understand what you are trying to say, maybe u can give a breif description forme, cuz i luv reading poetry, but i also like to know what the poem is about n shit ya know. ne way. u had some nice word play in that.

People have died and sacrificed everything just for humankinds deserved freedom
So why do we kill the weakest and undermind our own rising kingdom?
Speak with me; make our voices heard above the thunderous evil minds
For you’ll soon realize that helping in anyway is the best prize you’ll ever find

Thats my favorite part, cuz if u look at it closeley and take it to your head you acn really feel how real it is. ne way thats all i gots to say, stay up n stay strong, keep at work partna pce/