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Old 05-17-04, 03:02 PM   #10
Know-Gimix
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Street Science:
your punches are a swing and a miss so smell the ::asscence of air::
u can try 2 rap like emeniem grippen his nuts but u only ::caressen pubic hair::
Kind of a weak punchline- the first line didn't make any sense and the second didn't save the bar
leaven ya chances of victory descendin like lane crashes::
punches hittin ya head so hard you'll be slower then ::retarded molasses::
decent wordplay in the first line- the punch could have been worked to hit harder.
quick to murk ::kats::, leavin ya holy from ::spike bats::
ha called me out didnt ya no im the type to ::fight back::
This was filler and weak filler at that.
your punches could be bricks and they still couldnt ::stop me::
a neculer missle aimed at my chest and my brain couldnt ::drop me::
its spelled nuclear- and I dunno what you could have done to make this punch line hit well but the way its set up now is kind of basic not very impressive
you culd could come out in louisanna and it still wouldnt be urchased::
sumbmergen ya ships, and you still didnt scratch my ::surface::
it rhymes and flows well enough but no real wordplay or punches- the louisanna line was too basic
you were maken it seem like i was runnin and you were ::chasen::
you like a kid lookin in the mirror wit amnesia ya forgot who your ::facen::
first line was an o.k set up and the punchline didn't hit too hard but its better than most of the other lines in this verse...

The One:
i'll split cha spleen spiting the sickest 16
how r u submergen all my ships when im whipping a submarine
Decent opener, could play off his verse-
this faggot straite wack and his rhymes are made of rubber
and he been fucked so many times his butholes a different color
not a great punchline but it gets a little chuckle
how r my punches swing and miss and i got a scope on the pistol
i smella k.o. comming on the ref betta blow that wissule
or throw in the towel one of the 2 you betta do
im not styles P,but im way better than you
It's whistle.... these 2 bars flowed well, the styles p line got a chuckle.. not anything spectacular but its good.
i aint a human im a program determined to kill
maybe missles couldent drop you but i bet my knuckles will
Nice lines here I liked this part
this nigga pulled out his best rymes just to battle the one
i could freestyle and beat you the battle is done
Kinda weak, filler verse
you better rise to the occasion the one is always blazing
you might be hot but im crazely amazing
again kinda weak, filler verse
if you wanna keep ya cash you better run for ya money
cuz i got rhymes to give cassidy a run for his money
egh, I dunno I don't real feel this closer.

This battle was kinda close but I think The One pulled off the V for the fact of that 4 line section you got in this which was the nicest 4 lines in the battle.... Good job both I vote for The One..... Please return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124761
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