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Old 05-17-04, 04:38 PM   #6
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okay here is a bar for bar breakdown....

This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays
Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's!
Good punch and meta...nice wordplay...good opener...8/10
Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again
Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs
Good meta...good punch...1st line coulda been better....7/10
You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll
This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll!
Haha...good punch...waitin for an insane one...8/10
JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though
Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo!
Weak...6/10
Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent
Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!!
Nice personal and punch....good closer....8/10

Verse Score - 37/50 = 74%

Well your verse was decent....i mean you had punches but nothing that had me laughing or sayin DAMN!....fourth bar fucked up your sustainment....decent verse....nice flow....good meta's...only a couple personals....expected a better verse....

Cryogenics...ahhh the art of making things cold...
so retarded...for best rapper...lil jon he polled..
hahaha....good punch....semmed wack at first....but the punch landed hard....8/10
Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text...
Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject...
Damn...another hard hitter....9/10
Got laughed outta the LLL...and it's soon to occure again...
leave battles...head back to the lounge and make another wack top ten...
Nice personal and punch...comin really hard at him....8/10
Cause having you on the list is like having Gunit101 in first...
The only chance you have is if the mods have our text reversed...
Nice punch...8/10
Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'...
You're the worst thing to happen to battling since 'White Out' arrived...
Good meta...okay punch....7/10
Where's your 'mom' and 'fat' jokes...i know you think that's street...
Brag about your 17 wins...but won't show all your defeits...
lol nice punch and personal...8/10
Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned...
Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!...
Nice punch and closer...decent...7/10

Verse Score - 55/70 = 79%

Well you topped his verse...you had better punches...they were more direct...u had more and better personals....flow was nice.....wordplay was good...but ur punches won u this battle.....good verse...

Vote - JPoll
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