im gona have to vote da jokah on this one because he always comes hard with hard punches and he has an amazing flow. the one thing u can improve on though is maybe usin the persons name in some of the rhymes cause u have the skill to make a line up quick jus itd be a lot more effective if u had lines about that persons name

dalyricalvillain, your stuff wasnt that bad but it does need some work. u have the real potential to come up wit good busts for ur opponents but i think like me u cant put it into words. but u have a good battle and try workin on ur flow a little bit more but never sacrifice flow for good hits.good job pc

my vote-da jokah