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Old 05-17-04, 06:07 PM   #3
DON
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aight heres how i saw it

gaven u had good punches but the problem was they werent organized i think u should try a better rhyme scheme cause it doesnt flow too well. i liked the line bout stabbin in tha face that was good.

muderous mic ur flow is great the only lije i think didnt make sense was bout the lesbians but it still fit. the way u splled out that message wit ur lines was crazy i liked that. u have good hits i liked it a lot

my vote-murderous mic
but u both did good