I think black took this.....he came harder than Accomplishment......Nice
structure by the way.......You took this becuz of your similies and metaphores.
Work on punches more but they was tight too.......Thats all
v/blak

Return the favor please...I murked him
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400

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