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Old 05-17-04, 06:31 PM   #13
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seventhird - okay decent drop....pretty short verse for a topical.....but u statyed on topical....not a lot of description to see it happenin....but go the story well....jus elevate on the wordplay.....nice drop....give it a....
6.7/10

atmosphere - another decent drop....liked the ending...pretty funny....but not as beleivable as sevenminds...u stayed on topic....better flow....better wordplay....even though his was better to believe by a tiny bit.....ur flow and wordplay killed his....thats why you got this....
6.9/10

Vote - Atmosphere....this wasd a very evenly matched contest....keep elevatin.....
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