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Old 05-17-04, 07:23 PM   #10
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Check Dis..

GKillaz05: 6/10
Your Verse Was Nice, Decent Punches THrown Here...But Your Personals Were Lacking and Your Structure Wasn't THat Nice But The Flow Was Aight...Keep Dope and Active.

Mike12: 5/10
Your Verse Was Aight, Your Punches Weren't As Hot As I Thought They'd Be, But They Could've Been Better With More Wordplay and Personals. Work On Metaphors, Punches, and Structure.

Vote - GKillaz

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