atmosphere-your verse was okay......your imagery could ahve been better....your structure was was good.....flow was onpoin......overall good verse man17/20


Seven-your verse was alright.........your imagery could use some work just like atmos......your structure i wasnt really feeling.....his was better wunc he edited it......you just need to work on your vocab and imagery and you should do good16.5/20

v/atmos but jus barly


No crew votes
-strobe