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Old 05-17-04, 07:33 PM   #11
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MIKE

After this battle, you’ll remember that I’m the emcee that “gave-you-scars”
You didn’t know your destined to lose like you never “played-with-cards”
Claiming you elevated, but you can’t even “raise-the-bar”
I dominate this “post” like Kareem Abdul-Jabar….
-Nice opener and way to set it off,

Spiting my hottest shit like I put my verse in a microwave
You will die-in-shame, admitting that, “my-flows-lame”
Gkillaz is one emcee that LD-should-waive….
-Not bad tight flow solid punch

Your like blonde-headed Japanese, a “disgrace” to this culture
Eating up whack ass emcees like I was Rap battle’s vulture
-haha that first line is funny, nice punch, creative as well

Put you in a mental hospital, I am darkening-fools
Fake gangsters like you are slaves to hip-hop’s marketing-tool (if you’ve seen his pic)
-alright, kinda lost ya on the last bit, I haven't seen his pic, ya gotta watch that.

If you “killing” “Gs”, you’re a suspect for murdering Pac
Now you destroying what rap’s God created
Fake Gs like you are one thing he hated
Your verse should be fire walled from RB and Triple X-rated......
-This was alright not really feel'n it but still nice flow through the bars

Rocking a D12 sweater, you must be Em’s number-one-fan
Your aggression from a loss will have you committing suicide like Stan
-Good solid punch I'd give most of these 6.5-7's

You need to eat weed before this battle, so you could spit-a-joint-friend
26-4, but after seeing this, your nothing but a dis-a-ppoint-ment
-Tight finisher, just like you started the battle





G KILLAZ

Im comin at this guy wit so many toasters turnin him into burnt-bread...
Wernt-ahead of me in this race now you want to close this current-thread...
-Nice opener almost as hot as his was if not even

My punches shred you and leave you hurtin like I was wearin brass knuckles...
Mike12Ikedas style is harmful to his self like drivin drunk wit no seat buckles...
-Thats was good creative to come up with seat buckles for the rhyme, nice

Everyone just chuckles.. no one on this site could care less if you live-or-die...
Mike is like a toothpick and im snappin him in half gettin a sliver-in-his-eye...
-Nice multi with the previous, and a nice punch

You wonder why your whack when your fav song the goo goo dolls - Iris...
Claims that he's a vet, but blaims that whack spit on a computer virus...
Hahah thats funny shit, and origional as well

He prayed for some hot linez but came out wit some shit that was played...
Aint gun get paid for your rapz might as well go join up wit a masquerade*...
-Not bad, not really feel'n it,

Starting up a lemonade stand for some money its Mike's last resort...
You got no support, like your wearin 9 inch heals your still goin to fall short..
-Origional it seems but heard somthing similar to it a couple days ago, at least the lemonade stand part, the second line was a nice punch

Start up a school report on how you wish you had skills, your style ima boycott..
YOu bought it at a dolla store but they forgot to tell you that its squat...
-Arougd this point you took the win, and you still have more punches left, always good

Style just keeps changin like everyday of the week, Ima start your losin streak...
Could be pop eye wit a life supply of spinage and punches still would be weak...
-Nice flow, and multi's but the punch didn't really hit, maybe to wordy

Your just an internet geek, like a hockey net wit no posts your all net...
Internet beef dont pose a threat, you could rap for 50 years still aint gun be a vet...
Nice punch, solid style again

There was no feedin allowed, so Mike turns into a Starving Kid from Ontario...
About to finish him off with my 20th Line, thats this Rap Battles scenario...
-That was the best finisher of the battle, thats why you won in general more punches, and more taht hit harder.
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