ok deleon

ok why the stretched bar first then shorten it up... but good verse you kinda whernt dissen him like what does briks have to do with him and kinda use punches but dont play them like the subject of shaq... it dosnt have to be used twice...


deadly vision

ok nice verse. i didnt like the structure but that was my only problem punches came hard as usual and there where more multies than have normally seen in your battle... hot verse

Deleon 8/10
DV 9/10

vote DEADLY VISION

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