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Old 05-17-04, 09:55 PM   #12
E Looch
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ok sons break down

accomplishment your opener was a good personal gettin played about this kids pic though and your closer was......... to much to complain about that besides it being stretched an havin a forced multie and the rest of your verse was average to me had personals thats good an i only liked 4 lines of your whole verse that i felt was actually good punchs but u kept comin with personals overall decent verse here

m section um your opener was ummmm diferent not very effective though your closer was pretty nice to me if you catch the rhyme scheme in it decent punch and the rest of your verse was about on the same level ass accomps kept personals comin that momma shit please dont use that again and again i only liked about 4 of your lines but i felt they was stronger then his

just my oppinion vote m section

evenly matched battle to me should be close outcome
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