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Old 05-17-04, 10:00 PM   #13
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aiyo..Easy Win For UnHoly Wun...

Vinman: 2/10
You Alteast Tried To Diss, But Your Spit Lacked Everything A Respectable Spit Should Include. You Need To Go To The Help Threads, Look At Sum Of The Hot Battles On Here, and Study Them Deeply..

Unholy Wun: 5/10
Wasn't Feeling Your Punches That Much, No Real Word-Play and The Sentece Structures Are Fucked.....Your PUnches Were Alright But You Need Better Concepts and Metaphors. Don't Get Me WRong Nice Spit In All...But I Just Am Trying To Help.

Nice Drop To Wun

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