fat had more punches altogether but they were mad weak and the flow was FUCKED UP as was structure, ok you lost cause of the d/r votes and this line
you like a clock cause you like to tick my shots//
this dickryders like a glock cause he likes the cock//
i dont think that was even your worst but it pissed me off, u said "like" about as many times as u had lines

delinuent its nothin to be proud of you need a lot of work but you took it here, try lengthening your lines a little and forming harder punches