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Old 05-17-04, 10:37 PM   #15
FLooZe
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Da Infamous:not very good verse(s) i didnt know why the hell you put another spit after she dropped hers even tho you had already dropped two not very good verses.not very good flow,not too bad of structure,um,pretty weak
best line:none
worst line:all
wok on:rhyming,structure,flow,punches,everything
Hott Fire: I wasnt feeling your verse that much but i got to give this to you for better wordplay,flow,and structure.
best line: if i cant do it it cant b done//
im glade i didnt fuck ya mom den u b my son//
pretty good.good flow and diss
worst: dis nigga tryin to battle round 4 round//
but if u cant rap dont send me a pm clown//
i just wasnt feeling it.
work on:not much reallly just dont put the // in you verse,some people call it newbish

FINAL VOTE:HOTT FIRE
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