vote/nelly

nelly you had a better verse......your punches hit hard and stuck./........you structure was better and overall a good verse......you could use some work on your personals and reword your punches

luscious-you need to elevate.......you shouldnt put your shit in in bold it makes you look really Herbish.......work on your punches and your personals and elevate a lil bit and you should be good after some time

return the favor.....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124528

v/nelly

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