Girl ya 15, it's past ya bedtime and u aint finished ya homework
Ill keep u awake, give u lines so pure they make ya dome hurt

nice opener, flowed well and the punchline was decent.
U got a nigga lubin u up for so cheap u like a jetta pit stop
Saw u whistlin at the corner sayin "Pay whatever ya niggas got"
egh- I dont really feel it but it might just be me so I aint gonna say anything bad
And we know u wont get caught, cuz even bitch cops
Dont give a fuck about a ho whose cherry'll never get popped
ahh... and yes the wordplay catches up- decent couple bars
U ugly bitch, I saw ya pics, u aint even close to funny
And when i put my spliff out on ya lips u still aint spoken bluntly
probly the nicest punchline yet...i likes
Comin at me, simple minded like a moth next to the light
Heatin up a battle's easy as jiffy pop, why u cant get the recipe right?
yeah I really liked this bar as well... good punchline
And u try to diss, but youll only burn me if u gave me VD
But then id be doing a sentence for statutory five to fifteen
Not Amazing
U the artist formerly known as "Kid go paint by numbers", im Sistene on wax
I remember some dude said u was tight I said "Which wet dream was that?
decent closer...not bad i like the set up more than the punchline but still good.

EDUCATIONAL TYPE SHIT you can't match~my~wit you dealing wit a savage bitch/
Have ya heat *vanishin'* and close this *match* with lighter fluid packages/
Nice opener
You think you gutta cuz someone slipped u a *be a nicca for a day pass*/
Be honest the only way your shit would be flowing is if i passed u an exlax/
exlax is played, not a bad bar though
My only homework was to check da weather to see if u could deal wit my trenches/
Then i had to review ya Anatamy but couldn't measure ya scrotum with 3 pinches/
umm.. no yeah.. just no-- if you had worded that differently it coulda been killer
*Kill* you in a minute leave ya voice as *bloody* as static in ya attic/
*I WOULD GIVE YOU A HIT* but your dick is to0 limp to be *retracted*/
Um no again, this wasn't right at all-
You know alot about Menstrals CUZ YOU A *BLOODY PUSSY* on leak/
*I GLIDE IN EASY* *BLUNTLY'S here to *soak up ya rhyming streak/ (like a tampon)
nice punchline here i likes
BLAC SINS AND DIVINCI-how the fuck you got multiple lovers dogg be serious/
Rewind ya rhymes re-check ya suspenders gay lovers leave ya balls
*RE-DICK-U-LESS*~LEAVE YOU MORE BLOODY THEN A FAT GIRLS PERIOD/
Structure fucks up here, but its not too bad
NICCA UR STYLE AND NOT TO MENTION EVEN YOUR NAME IS VERY COMICAL/
IM PHENOMANAL~I PUSH LYRICS LIKE *NYPD* PUSH BULLETS THROUGH ABDOMANLS*/
nice punch line, nice setup good wordplay
YOU HAVE NO CHOICE BUT TO LOOSE *SIMPLE IT'S NO COMPRIMISE*/
OFFICIALLY HERE TO*GUIDE YOUR DEMISE* CUZ YOUR DICK SIZE LIES *IT'S ALWAYS ON A CONSTANT STATE OF "CIRCUMSIZED"/- um- no weak closer.....
I'd have to give this battle to Killuminatic... By no means do I think SpokenBluntly was wack, but I dissected the two verses to see what I liked better...Killuminatic punches hit harder, Killuminatic missed alot fewer punches as well, and I think ur structure held up better through out the whole verse... V- Killuminatic- Please return the favor.... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...068#post1295068

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