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Old 05-18-04, 01:38 AM   #25
Willa
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ok i think restricted whiped the floor with natives ass ur really overrated and come mad basic
restricted i would like 2 c u work on ur structurea little bit and work on ur multis but u had mad personals great flow and gret vocab

native u came hard but 2 basic against him ur flkow was great and ur structure was better u came with pretty good personals i think ur vocab could use work though


ok im givin it 2 r he had better vocab personals and closer good verse from both though

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