the BATTLE is strictly mine// battle TOXIC and get lynched with a
prickly vine// (well thats retarded)+your rhymes suck more than two faggots havin' sex in the sixty nine(3)(is gay lines played yet? i aint sure)// you ain't tough cuz you molest gay men(yet?)// I make U LOOK LIKE DEM HOMELESS KIDZ(so... where u goin wit this)//lung collapse and chest cave in// causin' so many nightmares even Wes
'cravin(4)(and this?)
your only punches were things about what imma do to u and jazz, no wordpaly or punches on his name and stuff, thats what i call good punches, i've heard too much of the stuff u jus spit

more of this-your freestyle is
cheap, it don't make cents
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so toxic your knocking on def doors....and dog no one hears you...
this and the first few lines were good.

cause dog toxins can only burn.......but they never have any fire... best line, nice punch on name.(personal)
coulda been better relating it to how he spits or sumin.

OH YEAH!......your on the road to riches!...but your car got side tracked...
makes sence and all, but aint a punch really, if u woulda related it to him being poor in the line before or sumin, like "your punches blew ya paper everywhere, u were makin stacks"your on the road to riches!...but your car got side tracked. sumin to relate back like that. so its more of a punch.

anyway this gambino characters i was feelin more, like ya punches and personals more

vote that cat

hit my battles up.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124798
and the one in my sig. return honest like homes

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