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Old 05-18-04, 02:51 AM   #11
macKa
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this battle was ok i guess. punches were gernally weak and hte flow was pretty boring. ill breka it down.

Kryo
This fag gets no love from me! I constantly boot gays
Folks thought I was Jordan,The way I promptly Shoot J's!

meh, u know, its ok. it's a punch at least. not saying anything that great though. flow was good, rhyme scheme average. 6.5/10

Engyma beat him before,and now he's about to get beat again
Cause if J-Poll has a Shoe In for the win...Im Ampitating Limbs

Didn't really rhyme here. Just saying someone lost before without any other sort of punc is pretty weak. Nothing special. flow ok, but it didn't really rhyme. 5.5/10

You are just a wack newbie...so damnit.....you play the roll
This kid claims he's manly,but ONLY GAYS want to see J's Poll!

first line was stupid, but the second one was OK. would have been really wack, since it was just a gay punch, but u used his name which made it ok. flow was ok again, not great. rhyme scheme was once again average. 6.5/10

JPoll is weak as fuck!..HEY!..Im just keeping shit real though
Cause although he's Nice with a Mic..he's even better with a dildo!

not bad ere actually. Using his subnic. You could have used it better though i think. not too bad though. flow ok, rhyme scheme ok. 7.5/10

Im hell sent..let JPoll act tough...I will leave this dude bent
Cause like Clumsy Architects....I destroy BluePrints!!!

This didn't really rhyme very well again. But the last line had some nice wordplay, good punch. flow was a bit off and the rhyme scheme wasn't good. 7.5/10


J-Poll

Cryogenics...ahhh the art of making things cold...
so retarded...for best rapper...lil jon he polled..

sounded very contrived. wans't smooth at all. not a good opener i dont think. didn't do anything for me at all. flow was pretty off and rhyme scheme was weak. 4.5/10

Yur just like Ja rule..you hold no wait with wack text...
Before U talk to Jpoll...remember who's the Old RB reject...

OK I guess. not bad. flow was ok, rhyme scheme was off again. 5/10

Got laughed outta the LLL...and it's soon to occure again...
leave battles...head back to the lounge and make another wack top ten...

not bad. at least its a personal. other than that, nothing special. flow was off and rhyme scheme was weak. 5/10

Cause having you on the list is like having Gunit101 in first...
The only chance you have is if the mods have our text reversed...

nothing special once again. yeah, it's a punch, but not the greatest. flow was ok, rhyme scheme ok, pretty weak though. 5.5/10

Only spit gay jokes...seriously Kryo is it still 95'...
You're the worst thing to happen to battling since 'White Out' arrived...

getting better here. nice personal stuff. punch was ok, could have made it better. i dunno, more complex or something. floww as a bit off, rhyme scheme was ok. 6.5/10

Where's your 'mom' and 'fat' jokes...i know you think that's street...
Brag about your 17 wins...but won't show all your defeits...

not bad. once again, nothing really special. need some mroe complexity though. flow was ok, rhyme scheme was ok. 7/10

Now that ur merked...please listen again stunned...
Yur the trick clowned off every rap site...especially this one!...

not bad. pretty weak for a finisher though. flow was good, rhyme scheme was good. 7.5/10

Kryo
Line by Line - 67
Complexity - 10
Vocab - 8
Total - 85

J-Poll
Line By Line - 59
Complexity - 12
Vocab - 11
Total - 82

Therefore, Kryogenix just got this.