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Old 05-18-04, 04:15 AM   #12
LusciousLeftfoot
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Originally Posted by .flows.
aight pimp takes this
Pimp-You had better punches than black
But work on some punches and similies also the metaphores
balanced was stabled

blackwell-Work on everything thats all I have to say except for structure

v/pimp



whut he said..........

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