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Old 05-18-04, 09:09 AM   #27
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Restricted - probably the best i`v read from you yet.. flowed well generally.. a few stretched bars here and there.. but.. way too many links.. makes you look like a geek.. fishin` around the archives an shit.. alot of the personals have been used before on Chrit so many links were ineffective or played.. some played ideas i.e. `more alias` an your opener was pretty weak.. wasn`t much of a punch.. jus` a statement.. closer was worst line of ya verse.. jus` looked like you was desperate to get his names in.

Native - brutal.. not a word too many.. every line was efective an witty.. punches were connectin`.. personals an name flip were cool.. `blacklist` line was a tad played.. last two bars were mad quotable tho.. best lines of the battle.. closer itself was dope.. you won this for wittier, more original punches.

And Restricted lost this for too amny ineffective `link` punches.

v/ Native.

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