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Old 05-18-04, 02:14 PM   #11
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for illtalic: flow was working alright the structure took abit to get into but alright job. pretty good use of volcab for the type of verse too, some nice lines here also my fav,"I rap Casual… but still remain Smarter than 99% of the board
Better than most…" good line and great way to open the verse overall i'd give this verse 7/10

breakdown for deadly visionz:flowed well no off spots through the peice overall nice job there, volcab was a highlight from your verse really made your verse more readable,best line would be,"When i type i'm faster then a broadband that’s why your crew ran.." thought it was kinda different good job overall 7.5/10

vote-- deadly visionz takes this he just worked the match idea alot better and had his verse mechanics down too.
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