breakdown:

maku: before i do your breakdown im gonna let you know that your gettin points tooken off for stretched lines




I’ll use a tek to hollow ya mind//
you proud bout dick size, with heat I’ll take ribs, then make you swallow ya pride//
^^bad opener and 2nd line is double the lenght of 1st 3/10
flames spit to you, disfigures ya face//
Who am i? I am what you can’t be, like my signature states,//
^^good punch 6/10
A cat who murked you, and is ditching the trace//
Itching to say, to ya fam at ya wake, bout how piss dripped from ya waist//
^^how piss dripped from your waist...??? but good multies and punch 7/10
When this animal-man, mauled you to death//
Crushed ya body wit palms, like eve, you see imprinted paws on ya chest*//
^^good personal stretched line 7/10
I crippled you with a glance, you’re scared? I’ll run for you//
If you kill me, I’ll escape from death, return and come for you//**
^^decent finisher not that hott tho 5/10

overall: 29/50...woulda got like 38 if lines werent stretched


.flows.

Nigga pay attention my flows seem like they leave ya with stitches....
Ground ya in ditches,He has no friends so he hang with goth bitches...
^^hott opener good punch creative 8/10
You simease fuck ya keep on fucking takin and bitin lines.....
Flows leave ya with fines He so into with me he even studies my rhymes
^^ok punch not hott 5/10
All around RB..Ya flows is seen...He cryin becuz im being mean..
Murk ya ass so much leave ya rainbows on ya computer screen...
^^list line gay 2nd line decent 4/10
stay poppin with cap guns not with nines..Level Down to ya fuckin size
Sayin "Dude" everywhere and giving high fives..Keep doing them untill ya paralized...
^^good 2nd line first line kinda weak 6/10
Wack People like you fuckin join german Cathlic families..Work on similies
But if ya ever up to a challenge and ready for anotha murkin dont fuckin study ya enemies
^^good personal about studyin enemies deent finisher 7/10

overall: 30/50

vote:.flows.

maku work on your structure its a lil off...punches were decent work on those too...you got some good wordplay..widen your vocabulary..flows. you need to widen your vocab too use harder punches and better wordplay/multies

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