Check Dis..

Nelly: 5/10
Your Structure Wasn't That Nice, But Your Punches Were Alright and Yours Was More Direct Towards Him. Work On Metaphors, Word Usuage, and Hotter Punches..

Luscious: 4.5/10
Aiyo Your Word Ususage Was Alright, Sum Punches Didn't Make Sense. Your Battle Verse Coulda Been Used Against Anyone. Only Bar That Could've Been Mistaken As Used Against Nelly Was The Last Bar....Just Work On Personals, Punches, and Metaphors.
Yours Was More Like Open Mic...

Vote - Nelly

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