i didn't like either of ya'lls structure but ya'll had some good original punches wit wordplay and personals. like the notepad one "punchlines" and the other cats battlin a newbie no matter how bad ya record aint a goot "statagy" good personal.
get ya'll stuctures better and less stretched lines and keep that wordplay be a better battle, but pretty good. i beleive wordplay is the hardest next to playin off someones name so. vote- 22
cuz that was a real nice play off the name, get more wordplay like that other cat and this will be easier to vote for ya.

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