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Old 05-18-04, 07:18 PM   #11
puertoricanelly
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From: KILLAFORNIA
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Return the favor or i aint votin on yur battles no more
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...7006post1297006

Aight this battle was hella one sided LOL WILL won this that closer had me DyINN!!!!!!!!!
Boaty ur spit wasnt garbage i think Will was just better in this battle u just need to work on wordplay and structure and come harder with punches
WILL ur spit was koo the best line u had was the last closing lines but ur structure was wack and wordplay could be worked on along with throwing in some multis

V=WillS.unyu

KEEP ELEVATING

RETURN THE FAVOR
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...7006post1297006
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