Jae-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and
metaphores..Balacance was ok.....just work on a few things and ya will be there......

Doc-Came kind of weak....Work on something structure was ok
but work on some thing.....Multies Definitly need more
work.....But keep elevatin and work on alot
of things
v/Jae
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124905

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