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I think Senser takes this one, his punches were harder, beat was far tighter and the vocal balance was right on. O I like your closing line that was tight, your intro was alright but I wasn't really feel'n the beat. Your lyrics were average but Senser had some nice punches with his so my vote goes to Senser
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