Boy!!!After hearin u spit you should be tangled wit a chord//
Cuz ur spit sounds like a cryin hore, bein muted should be a award//
Everyday I spit hard to retards like to this boy thinkin he'll reach far//
Boy!!ur whole verse was wack, try agen later but first u betta recharge//
I'll spit like demolition, never out of amunition//
Boy!!No matter wut ur verse would be wack even if it was pre-written//
Here's a proposition, after u bein called a newb u'd better take a lower position//
Listen, try bein called garbage so stop tryin ta be a rap musician//
Imma end this boy easy, quickly, and even wit out tryin//
Cuz ur verse is sad to read, feels like a person is dyin//

3 minutes of wacknes!!!^^^haha..man boy!!i thought u were better then that..
thats coo though....i thought people were good in this site..it's coo though..
good try though boy...good luck!!!!!

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