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Old 05-19-04, 12:35 AM   #2
young beezy
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From: fo' shizzle in tha dirty but reppin LB New J
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im sorry to be the 1 to break it to ya but this was bad n needs a lot of work, some of ya lines didnt rhyme n this was very basic some of ya lines were to long, it basically sounds like a first time ever writing song sorry but much love work harder n u will achieve more
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