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Old 05-19-04, 04:46 AM   #12
JPoll
I'm So Punny
 
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BREAKDOWN

flow...mad dog
punch...mad dog
personal/...tie
extra...tie
vocab...fine

good drop...fine you came out good...but it really tailed off...i didn't like the filler you had...but you're improving man

dog nice drop...try to have more personals...get at the kid any way you can... nice drop though...you're improving nice shit...

v- mad
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