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Old 05-19-04, 08:40 AM   #5
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t-strom's fronting bitch, puttin you down and stop you in tracks/
run you over with lyrical talent you can't hold back/
like a tidal wave after you, i could crush you in one second/
this guys a midgit, stupid ass nigga from an estate in england/


^^^ HOW IN THE HELL DOES ENGLAND RHYME WITH SECONDS...SHIT LIKE THAT IS THE REASON YOU LOSE BATTLES FINE MIND...YOUR FLOW IS GOOD...YOUR STRUTCTURE IS GOOD...BUT YOU RHYME SECOND WITH ENGLAND...STOP IT!



ima take out this fly-weight..compared to him im mohammed ali/
this guy floats like a butterfly..but i sting like a killah-bee/
ima punch this guy in his guts..so he can spit his lunch up/
thats tha only way he be "sick"..he cudnt "cum"hard watchin a porno-flick/

^^^ same to you...how does FLICK rhyme with UP? WTF..just stop!


Ne way

My vote is going to T Storm...only because he had way more attempts at clever wordplay/metas/punches.


But, FINE MIND:

I've always said that you could be one of the best on this site. I believe that. Your structure and disses are good. Just elevate on the rest and you'll be a force to reckon with.


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